tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3495237943877181978.post370567675055758572..comments2023-06-21T03:40:21.532-04:00Comments on A Cat's Blooming Rose | A Black Cat Creed/Train Yaoi / Shonen-ai Fansite ( Creed X Train ): The Lion - A Black Cat Poem Depicting Creed's View on Train's Changes | Provided by a Creed/Train Fansite- ACat'sBloomingRosereychop.exehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01695609003557878738noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3495237943877181978.post-27762443727785220002009-06-04T20:01:45.720-04:002009-06-04T20:01:45.720-04:00First of all, tell them that Aki-chan says poems d...First of all, tell them that Aki-chan says poems do rhyme whether it be consecutive or alternate. That is why they have a rhyme scheme in poetry. When you write a free verse poem you are bound to rhyme somewhere in the poem though it will be alternate. Unless, you are some sick twisted person that writes a free verse and tries to make sure that none of the words in the poem rhyme, it will have a rhyme somewhere along the line. And besides, poetry has its own rhythm, so it is up to the reader on whether or not it will rhyme when they read it.<br /><br />Secondly, you shouldn't worry about if the poem doesn't rhyme, rather, you should worry about whether it makes sense or not and if you are connecting your points correctly. Every line in the poem does not need to rhyme so take your time and have fun with. So DON'T worry about whether it rhymes or not because it is bound to fall into a rhyme scheme whether you want it to or not. But if you do continue to worry about whether it rhymes or not, I suggest that you try writing free verse. It does not need to rhyme but if you want to write one with a complete thought that rhymes keep practicing.<br /><br />Also, if I'm in the mood I think I'll create blog for my poems so you can read them as well. Of all of the poems I've written, I've saved about twenty-one of them, which is a little considering how many I've originally written; however, unlike most people, my poems go through a process of elimination based on whether I like it or not. Let me know what you think of this and the feedback.Aki-chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754305817217244987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3495237943877181978.post-85249980055207454132009-06-04T06:54:28.517-04:002009-06-04T06:54:28.517-04:00I have written a lot of poems and posted them in m...I have written a lot of poems and posted them in my website. Here's the link if you're interested http://reychop-exe.blogspot.com/search/label/Poems<br /><br />It actually started just last year when we are at the final stage in publishing our school papers. We are doing some final checking on Literary section when I saw that the poems do NOT RHYME! -gasp- The horror! All poems MUST HAVE RHYMING Stanzas either alternate or consecutive. It is unacceptable.<br /><br />AS the "EDITOR-IN-CHIEF" it is my duty to correct this. So I told them but they refuse. Challenging me to "if you don't like it, then make your own. Thus my love for poems began.<br /><br />This is actually my first poem for Black Cat. So I'm a bit shy of it though I must admit the ideas do not connect because I'm more worried on the rhyme. But I think I'm getting the hang of it and in time, I will be able to write one with rhyme and complete thought.<br /><br />Anyway, you seem to be an expert in this field. Would I have some feedback? ^_^reychop.exehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01695609003557878738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3495237943877181978.post-27836312824963650272009-06-03T14:48:27.284-04:002009-06-03T14:48:27.284-04:00Oh wow! Ran-chan I love that poem. I would have ne...Oh wow! Ran-chan I love that poem. I would have never thought of anything like this but then again, I'm writing a poem/song for the website right now. Also, I didn't know you could write poetry! I thought I was just a loner on the poetry and song creation. Yay! Now I know I'm not alone when it comes to poems!Aki-chanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16754305817217244987noreply@blogger.com